In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?

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creature and plants are especially part of the earth.
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time many species are disappearing and declining, it consists of different factors, as People's negligent attitude towards nature, exactly brokerage, emission of toxic substances on the garbage or discarding elastic
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and so on. In
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over the world populations did not
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these problems. Only some countries in Europe try to
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eco system
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and do more things, create good conditions for the wild animals and plants. Of course, it is required
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big care and
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many massive works to protect the environment by people.
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, I think we must begin to use
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household life biodegradable things, not use plastic dishes, packages in every family.
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determine general rules in each government, for ,instance prohibit using plastic packages,
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box for
further
reworking.
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, to get the recycling work well established, for these purpose construct industries and support local businessmen to do these works, so as not to increase the waste with plastic.
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, creating reserves to prevent our planet and animals,
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each government and local sponsors would pass
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money to these sanctuaries to do better terms for our planet.
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, I understand
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not easy work for the government, but if every person to try safe nature begin own self, we can influence for
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serious problem and can better
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world. To sum up, if we did not
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these planet
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we must
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save our animals and planets, even everyday use non
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things.
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