You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Dear

Gulpreet

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Gurpreet

, I hope you are doing well.I’m just writing to tell you that I recently went to an exhibition in Delhi that demonstrates the diverse culture of numerous states in India.There were people from all over the country selling traditional goods like handbags, clothes, footwear and many more. Can you believe everything is of superior quality and that too at a reasonable price? I am well aware that you are fond of collecting things that represent different cultures.Remember, how we used to travel to various cities so that we can do

shopping

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the shopping

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and buy souvenirs.

This

time we are getting so much variety at one place

hence

it’s a great opportunity for us to increase our collection of traditional and cultural goods. In fact, Why don’t you join me for the

visit? The exhibition will continue till 20th May so I will recommend you

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book train tickets for

this

weekend.I hope that you don’t have any other plans during

this

time.We will have a lot of fun together just like old days. I am really excited to meet you. Yours lovingly, Jasmine

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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