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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

#event #exhibition #show #friend
Dear
Gulpreet
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Gurpreet
, I hope you are doing well.I’m just writing to tell you that I recently went to an exhibition in Delhi that demonstrates the diverse culture of numerous states in India.There were people from all over the country selling traditional goods like handbags, clothes, footwear and many more. Can you believe everything is of superior quality and that too at a reasonable price? I am well aware that you are fond of collecting things that represent different cultures.Remember, how we used to travel to various cities so that we can do
shopping
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 and buy souvenirs.
This
 time we are getting so much variety at one place
hence
 it’s a great opportunity for us to increase our collection of traditional and cultural goods. In fact, Why don’t you join me for the
next
 visit? The exhibition will continue till 20th May so I will recommend you
to
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book train tickets for
this
 weekend.I hope that you don’t have any other plans during
this
 time.We will have a lot of fun together just like old days. I am really excited to meet you. Yours lovingly, Jasmine
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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