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Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent, do you agree or disagree

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With the popularity of advanced technology inventions
such
 as portable devices or laptops, it has become easier for
human
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a human
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 to interact and communicate with each other.
Other
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 thinks that
verbal
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 communication skills of youngsters have declined due to these modern gadgets. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
this
 statement and I shall put forth some points to demonstrate my ideas in the following paragraphs. Supporters of smartphones or tablets may argue that
people
 can meet or talk to their companions anytime just by clicking a button. It is true that most
of
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social
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 media applications
such
 as Facebook or Zalo are compatible with portable devices.
Thus
, mobile phone users can make new friends and communicate virtually through video call functions.
As a result
, these inventions will help
people
 shorten their time for
real life
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 meetings while delivering efficiently their messages to the recipients.
Moreover
, there are
also
 Emoji functions on chatting apps that can allow users to express better their feelings and emotions.
On the other hand
, communication skill is crucial which often requires frequent practices by talking and
listenning
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listening
 to others. Sadly, some users especially teenagers have become dependent on these gadgets and spent too much time behind the
creens
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screens
. Due to the availability and convenience
from
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 smart items,
people
 have become lazy to spend time on real-life meetings of coffee talks with their beloved ones.
Thus
, they have fewer occasions to socialize and sharpen their communication skills.
Moreover
, lack of social meetings may make bachelors become shy and lose their confidence to generate meaningful conversations with others and create critical connections for their future careers. In conclusion, it is undoubtedly that advanced technology has made human life more convenient,
however
,
people
 are increasingly dependent on these inventions and lose their
nature
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 abilities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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