Many people believe that a person’s culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that it has only minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Culture
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an individual’s
culture
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a small
influence
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place can define Use synonyms
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culture
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culture
, even though they live in a certain place for a long time. Parents, especially, are the influencers and teachers whom their children learn from. Use synonyms
For example
, an Asian family who live in western countries for generations. Even though they have been living in a Linking Words
country
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cultures
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cultures
once a year.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite