The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowdays

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,

Issues

related to

health

are escalating day by day.Few of the population think that the advert of

health

issues

and sickness are more significant than medication and therapy.So ministry

financenshould

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finance should

consider it.While some people oppose

this

idea.I will discuss both ideas in

this

essay and

latter

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the latter

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view has advantages.

To begin

with,these days individuals are suffering from many

diseases

like obesity,

diabeties

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diabetes

,cancer and so on.

Government

can control the food habits which are responsible for

these sickness

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this sickness

these sicknesses

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because numerous

of

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diseases

are occur due to having

a junk food

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junk food

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or having

a bad eating habits

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a bad eating habit

bad eating habits

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.

Thus

by controlling these things ,authority can reduce the chances of illness among people.Apart from

this

,few environmental factors are key responsible for people's ailments

such

as pollution ,releasing of harmful chemicals from factories.

For instance

,thermal plants are established in the city near

the

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crowded places.

Hence

,emitting

of

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these chemicals causes plenty of

disesases

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diseases

like breathing problem and so on.

On

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the

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contrast,treatment and drugs are important than

advert

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the advert

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of

issues

related to

health

and disorders.Regulating bodies should pay more attention in term of funds to

this

.Some

diseases

can not be controlled like cancer,genetic disorder and so on.So

government

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cannot handle the sickness which

arise

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naturally in the human body.

Thus

,it is better

instead

of controlling

health

problems,

ministry

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the ministry

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should pay more emphasis on developing new

technquies

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techniques

to improve the

health

of

indiviuals

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individuals

.

For example

,in developing countries like India,Sri Lanka and many more.These countries are far behind

than

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developed countries in term of

health

treatment.So ,in that case ,subsidies should be provided to both

government

and private hospitals.So that mankind can get their treatment easily without any worries. In conclusion,

ministry

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the ministry

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can

controll

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control

the ailments and

health

issues

up to

certain

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a certain

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limit but some

of

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diseases

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the diseases

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cannot be prevented.So,

i

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admit that

government

should spend more money

in

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on

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providing

health

care treatments and remedies.