All museums and art galleries should be free because they are an important part of a country's culture. How far do you agree with this statement?

There has been much discussion revolving around whether

museums

and

art

exhibitions ought not to be excluded by fees. From my point of view, I partly agree with

this

statement, described in the following essay before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, the principal reason that supports

this

statement is that

museums

and

art

galleries play a vital role in a nation’s culture.

In other words

, it can be seen that both places are one of the

equipment

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that

provide

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a plethora of information about traditions or cultures to visitors. Rijksmuseum in Amsterdam is a perfect example in

this

case. In

this

museum, apart from works of

art

, the visitors could learn Dutch ancient traditions from several things that they have presented in the museum.

Therefore

, visiting all the exhibitions for free is an efficient way to let travellers learn about the country’s cultures.

On the other hand

, there is a myriad of person who always complains about the cost that they have to pay before

enter

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to the exhibitions, but it is undeniable that every business has its own expenditures. In simple terms, to make their

museums

or

art

galleries can be continued in the future, they definitely need a profit in order to cover their expense.

For instance

, hiring an individual to take care of and manage the

museums

, the owner has to give wages to their employees.

Hence

, it is crucial for the firm to have an income from the

museums

’ tickets. In conclusion,

although

I agree that

museums

and

art

shows are vital for citizens to learn about cultures, the budget that the firms have to concern is

also

important. I believe that

this

issue can be solved

by

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the

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help from the government.