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Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

#students #subjects #mathematics #philosophy #schools
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In school,
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 have to study many compulsory courses.
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, some of them do not suit some
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. So, there is a thought that
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 should be able to choose courses they want to learn. I personally agree with
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 statement because of two reasons.
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, learners waste their time for nothing if they have to learn the
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 they do not like. In those
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, they will be unhappy and not comprehend anything.
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, their grades and scores in those courses will be lowed.
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, if you hate mathematics and you have to sit in the mathematics class for hours, does it better if you spend
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 time on something you like?
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, it is better if some
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 are optional for
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.
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, every
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 has different dreams. In school, every
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 has to study the same
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 mostly. To have
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 learn the
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 which are relevant to their future work is crucial.
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, they can use their expertise and skills which they will get from the school in their jobs.
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, if one
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 wants to be an engineer, he or she should have the ability to spend his or her time on engineer-related
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 more than other
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. So, schools should let learners choose their desired-to-learn
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. To conclude, in my opinion, schools should make some
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 optional for
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.
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 will support
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 in their happiness and endorse their future for good.
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