Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development

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It is often argued that, whether renewable
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beneficial or not.
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is the key resources of every state undoubtedly.
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, the convenient powers (coal, oil, natural gas) are used many nations while a few
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is used to modern
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such
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as wind and solar
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the following reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
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with, there are many advantages of using alternative
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. The most important one is
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kind of
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energy
is renewable
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we can take many resources from
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in order to all people will get and utilize equally. To be more precise
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is not affecting
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generation because
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many countries using conventional method while they are being faced
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of resources
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scarcity of intensity.
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Germany has been using renewable
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rather than fossil fuels since half of 2019
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, they are saving the strength of their
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generation people.
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,
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type of alternative
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will help to
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the amount of buying
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fuels because we are spending a huge amount of money to buy conventional intensity
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, we will invest one time in modern
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, we can get
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amount of
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from solar and wind. To be more precise we do not invest more capital for investing
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alternative project in order to we will get more
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investment.
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Costa Rica is the world
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fossil fuel-free nation in
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world. They are getting more intensity from new
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project in
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to they can everywhere. To
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, there are many improvements are available in renewable
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sources
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, many states are motivated to using
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method of
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rather than available. I hope
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trend will be increased in the upcoming years and more country will become
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fossil fuel-free country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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