Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet Other however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Health is wealth. A healthy society can only create a healthy nation. The people fitness level is one of the criteria for the country development irrefutably.
However
, a fair amount of people think that the individuals
will have Remove the article
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an
authority to maintaining Correct your spelling
any
of
their own fitness and meals whereas Change preposition
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other
believe that the ministry should ensure that their Correct pronoun usage
others
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residents
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a strength meals
. Viewing from the general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
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a strength meal
strength meals
To begin
with, there are many reasons for
the Change preposition
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individuals
must look their
own body and food because Change preposition
at their
this
is not a ministry job this
means the cabinet has a lot of work rather than check their each and every individuals
fitness. If you Change to a genitive case
individual's
want
live more years without any troubles, you should focus on their own body Add the particle
towant
such
as doing excercise
, walking, regular medical checkup. To be more precise each person should food Correct your spelling
exercise
exercises
concious
whether healthy, unhealthy Correct your spelling
conscious
therefore
, they can get Add the comma(s)
,therefore
advise
from the Replace the word
advice
nutriciens
and will follow their diet plan. Correct your spelling
nutritious
nutrients
For instance
, Indian folks are eaten more traditional food rather than packets provisions as a result
, they have a
good well-being. Remove the article
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In addition
, every person has a key responsibility to maintain on
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table
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a table
the table
On the other hand
, the cabinet should ensure their population shape and table how they will be conducted free
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a free
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every year. Change preposition
apply
In other
words
they must create Add a comma
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the
awareness about any new diseases in order Correct article usage
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to
the community will be safe from deadly diseases. Change preposition
for
For example
, Indian
ministry is conducted Correct article usage
the Indian
free
medical camp for their own citizens meanwhile they are provided Add an article
a free
tablet
and counselling sometimes they are doing operation in Change preposition
with tablet
free
medical camp.
To conclude, undoubtedly, each and every person should take care of their own shape along with good provisions whereas the Add an article
a free
the free
roling
party should check their citizens have a robustness life. Correct your spelling
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, in my opinion about this
the government should assure their population robustness rather than the Add a comma
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individuals
own responsibility because any deadly new virus will spread meanwhile the folks do not have any basic knowledge about the virus while the cabinet should create the awareness about particular virus this
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