People nowadays are used to disposable items meaning that they use things for a short time and throw them away. What is the cause of this and what problems it can lead to?

The bar chart below illustrates the comparison of
population
and
wealth
shares in the different regions of the world in percentage ownership. It can be seen that the biggest part of
wealth
share
is maintained in North America and Europe, while the
population
share
is mostly concentrated in China and other Asia-Pacific areas. By analyzing the given information the conclusion would be that regions with low
population
percentage mostly have bigger global
wealth
than regions with high
population
percentage and vice versa. To overview all of the main details the
share
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wealth
is incredibly poor in Africa, China, India, and other
lower income
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countries in Asia and it doesn’t match their
population
level. Taking India as an example where 16% of the world's
population
owns only 1% of the world's
wealth
. And
this
also
works on high
wealth
share
countries
such
as North America (36 %) Rich Asia Pacific (24 %) and Europe as well (29 %) which mostly have the lowest
population
indicators.
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