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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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The issue of whether today a human throws
food
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 has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that there are so many ways to reduce waste
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 as store in the fridge, make bio-fertilizer which help protect the environment.
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, others insist on the opinion that people who make money deserve what is good for their health. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
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 with, it is a waste worth giving up
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instead
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 of reducing it in order to save money.
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, keeping cuisine in the fridge is one of the ways to solve the problem of leaving too many nutrients.
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, the apple which inhabitants buy in shops can be kept in good condition in the refrigerator, it can be used in 3 or 4 days, it will save a lot of money for people rather than throw away.
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, reserving our habitats by using bio-fertilizer which is made from foodstuff, is very helpful for the tree and environment.
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, the eatables and drinkables which were leftover can be reprocessed into biological fuel
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 as nutrients for the plant,
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 is not only a developed tree but
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 protected habitat perfectly.
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, recycling something we do not need like over lefts can substantially get rid of wasting the worth and asset and contributes to protecting the earth from the pollution by garbage.
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, some of the population think that inhabitants who have to work the whole time should have
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 which is a great ability to keep their health safe so that the over lefts should be thrown away.
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, wasting a lot of foodstuff by throwing it away is not a good way for both people and the environment so we should reduce it to save worth and make the earth clean. In conclusion, a human usually leaves so much
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 because they think using it again is not good for their body and it maybe leads to some disease
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 as cancer or stomach pain.
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, with the development of technology, citizens can find ways to reduce their over lefts like making organic fertilizer or so on.
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