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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Over the past years, the internet has
becone
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become
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 for some people before purchasing their desired goods. They filter the information by reading
product
reviews
 both positive and negative
experience
 from the buyers
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 the internet. In my opinion,
this
micro blogging
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 trend in
product
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 review section builds positive impacts
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 the buyers and the sellers. I will examine my reasons in the below paragraphs.
Firstly
, the potential
customers
 can have a fair
comparation
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comparison
 of the
products
 from the honest
reviews
 on the websites. Back
to
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 the past years, people's decision on buying the
products
 was only controlled by the published
advertisments
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advertisements
 or the
brand
amabassadors
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ambassadors
. In current days, it is
accessable
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accessible
 to check
product
's quality and durability from the real
customers
instead
 of a rigid explanation and bias
experience
 that are
exhibitioned
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exhibited
exhibition
 on the
brand
's webpage.
Secondly
, the brands are benefited
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 the review through
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a
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platforms. If their
products
 derive many
positve
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positive
reviews
 from
customers
, it can boost the
product
 demand and spike the
brand
's sales.
For example
, one of Kiehl's
products
, Vital Skin Strengthening Super Serum became a talk of the town and the number one of Kiehl's serum in 2020 as they got many positive feedbacks from the beauty reviewers. It shows that the
product
's review from the real users gives a positive impact
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 the business.
However
, the
product
's owners must maintain
the
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good
reviews
 in order to avoid the pitfalls if the buyers
experience
 bad services. In conclusion, telling a
product
experience
 through the internet platforms can create positive developments to both sides.
However
, the amusement of
product
experience
 must be retained to protect
brand's
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 reputation
on
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customers
' eyes.
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