Many people join distance-learning programs (studys material, post, TV, İnternet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending collages or universities does. Do you agree or disagree

Some
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people
believe that tertiary education should be perceived in academic institutions, as online courses
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not provide the same advantage as, in-class education. In my opinion, learning with other students and teachers has a positive impact on the child in comparison to
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. One of the most significant
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is developing interpersonal and employability skills. These skills are mastered by working in teams for a task.
Similarly
, teamwork will help reduce anxiety for many people as they will practice public speaking.
This
, in turn, will help them prepare for entering the cooperate world.
For example
, a study performed by
University
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of Toronto in 2014 determined that children who worked in groups were more successful in acquiring a job compared to students that
acheived
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achieved
a degree through
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correspondence
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course.
Therefore
, studying in universities will help scholars develop in many ways and
also
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better learning
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environment
. Another important aspect of children attending classes is that they are provided
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learning
envoirnment
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environment
with less or no
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distraction
distractions
destruction
. In most cases, once finalist
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their classes, they only concentrate on the lecture.
Furthermore
, they are provided
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understanding of the topic from teachers who can make a connection with a child and better explain the topic.
For example
, the math teacher in my class would provide extra sessions for a child who was weak in the subject.
Thus
, one to one guidance is provided to students which helps them to develop
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in the subject. In conclusion,
although
online learning is
convinient
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convenient
for some people, I think that in-class learning can develop the skills of scholars to a greater extent.
Hence
, kids should be encouraged to join academic facilities to gain
theoritical
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theoretical
and practical knowledge.
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