Many parents today pay for private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？
Nowadays, schooling is essential to gain knowledge and to learn discipline in life.
Parents
pay a large amount of money on children
to get an education from the school
. However
, some parents
provide a private teacher
and pay them to teach their children
after school
. It can seem that a totally negative development.
Firstly
, at present, many schools collect huge fees
from the parents
. Guardians have to pay admission fees
to building fees
for every part mentions by the institute officials. Despite this
, if the parents
have to hire a private teacher
for children
study
then
it becomes an extra burden on parents
. They have to pay double fees
for their children
. Secondly
, every child spends more than 6 hours in school
. They also
get homework to do. They have very little time for themself. For example
, in a recent study
, many children
do not have time to play or enjoy life. They spend most of their time in study
. For ,children
physical and mental growth play the outdoor game is as essential as study
.
Thirdly
, children
learn the exact thing in school
and later they have to read in the home by the personal tutor. This
will make them boring and put an extra burden on them. They lost their interest in the study
. Finally
, spending all the day with the school
teacher
and a private teacher
, they do not have to spend with their family member and their bonding with them is not good. To exemplify, many researchers, find out that, children
whose have less interaction with their parents
have developed bad habits like smoking, drinking and illegal activity in an early age that effect on their whole life. They create a problem for themself and their parents
too.
To conclude, parents
already pay money to the school
than it is school
responsibility to teach them in the school
. Parents
do not need to hire a private tutor for their children
's study
. It is the failure of the school
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