The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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is evident by the pattern followed throughout the fashion market and other consumption cravings. Personally, I strongly agree with

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statement as it is extremely common that we observe tendencies to be copied in all sectors of our lives

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because

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have the need to feel included in society.

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and foremost, the idea of living in society creates a type of mirror where each one carefully watches the actions of

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and tries to fit in the model. Precisely, it is possible to observe

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pattern in the fashion industry when

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have gone along with the fashion tendencies - even if in

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moment it did not fit in their style - due

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unconscious necessity of belonging to a group.

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, many groups of

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who shared similar interests have been formed throughout history,

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as the hippies, which represented the union of

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likely to wear and use clothes and objects alike. To summarize, human beings possess

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need to be part of something bigger, and it can be easily represented by using comparable clothes and objects.

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, on a certain level, everyone shared the experience of being influenced by a product or someone in order to feel accepted. (Especially) Even more nowadays when social media through daily flash floods under our cell phone screens, creating the sense of necessity to have something to be accepted by

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idea of copying

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had been hugely

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by digital marketing, which created

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deep feeling of need or desire over some product. If we have developed a lower level of dependence on other

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, we could not have been constantly charged by

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necessity to feel accepted. In conclusion, human beings are extremely dependent on

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opinion and possess

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need of feeling acknowledgement which is hugely explored by all the sectors of industry.