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technology provides us a lot of means to communicate. but now that people have the ability to talk to each other in a wider variety of methods, our communication and social abilities have taken a step back. why does technological advance hurt nontechnical communication? how can we solve this problem?

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In
this
 era of modern
technology
,
people
has
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 different ways to communicate with one another.
This
 results in
majority
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the majority
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 of the population losing its ability to socialize and interact with each other in person.
This
 essay will discuss why
technology
 has made interpersonal
communication
 lessen compared to before and offer
solution
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a solution
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 on how to prevent it. Almost everyone has access to
smartphones
 and
good
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 internet connection. Most
people
 use it to communicate with friends and family
irregardless
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 of the distance. With just
few
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 clicks on the screen,
message
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a message
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 will be sent to the recipient without needing to go outside and interact personally.
Consequently
, frequent usage of
smartphones
 especially
of
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text messages decreases a person’s ability to socialize and interact personally without the help of
technology
.
However
, something can be done to prevent
technology
 from taking full control of our non-technological
communication
 skills.
Firstly
,
people
 should limit their usage of
the
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smartphones
 especially if communicating
people
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with people
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 nearby.
For instance
,
instead
 of spending hours chatting with friends over the phone, it will be better to meet in person in a coffee shop and practice conversation in person.
Moreover
, joining clubs and groups can help improve
the
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non-technical
communication
 skills. Participation in a group of
people
on
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in
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 your leisure time
instead
 of spending hours on
the
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smartphones
 will greatly improve
our
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 social skills. In my conclusion, easy access to gadgets like
smartphones
 has made
communication
 for everyone easier.
However
, it has made
people
’s social abilities declined. One way to solve
this
 is to limit the utilization of
smartphones
 through dining out with friends as well as joining clubs and groups that
promotes
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 interaction with other
people
.
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