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While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of those problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems.

#phones
There is no iota of doubt that wireless
devices
 are a necessary part of every individual's
life
.
This
 phenomenon offering multifarious benefits to
people
however
 a couple of problems emerge due to these electronic
devices
.The following paragraphs would cast light on the pros and cons of
phones
.
To begin
 with a bright side, mobiles are very easy to carry and
people
 can store huge amount of data in these
devices
 which help individuals in their daily
life
. Due to
this
 technology
people
 can send information to all over the world which leads to enhance their general knowledge about the World.
Moreover
, nobody can expect his
life
 without mobile
phones
 and it plays
such
 a part and parcel role in our daily routine. On the flip side of the coin, there are some nasty consequences as well
firstly
,
people
 are using their mobile
phones
 in excessive amount and they depend whole day on their
phones
 which leads to creating problems in their family
life
.
Secondly
 , some masses are very fond of social media and they waste their important time on social media applications like Facebook, Instagram and TikTok which leads to the cause of depression because they forget to achieve their carrier targets. There are myriads things to do which helps to reduce
this
 problem and
first
 and foremost is that, governments have to put some restriction on social sites which leads to creating a problem in the individual's
life
.
In addition
, there should be a chapter in the school curriculum which helps to aware students of the drawbacks of using an excessive amount of mobile
phones
. In the nutshell, parents and teachers have to educate their children on how to use mobile
phones
 and they have to make a proper schedule for their daily
life
 activities which assist to reduce the timing of using electronic
devices
.
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