Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?

Nobody would dispute the fact that we should have
fruits
and
vegetables
in our diets because they make our body healthier.
However
, some people think that we should spend the extra money to buy organic
products
instead
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organic
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cost and we definitely should buy them.In
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opinion. On the one hand, nowadays
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organic
products
are more available in
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groceries
and supermarkets.I reckon that there are a lot of advantages
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kind of food.
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vegetables
and
fruits
are grown without the use of artificial chemicals and hormones that can harm your stomach.
In addition
, I used to eat non-organic cucumber but it poisoned me and I had a terrible stomach ache.
Moreover
, studies show that
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organically grown
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have more nutritions and vitamins.
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the other hand, a lot of companies are producing fake natural
products
that
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contain
a lot of
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chemicals
.
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that their
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products
are original and they are not
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of
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cost.I assume that people should be very careful when they are choosing the
fruits
or
vegetables
in the
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groceries
.
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, there are several studies
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no difference in organic and non-organic food. To sum up, I reckon that natural food is much better and it
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contains
more nutritions.
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products
depends on people choice and everyone should eat what they like and prefer.
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