Due to growth of population many people live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas. Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?
Raising
of
the population is becoming a reason for more infrastructures. Lots of individuals are living in the average size of flats where they Change preposition
apply
also
don't have outside space
. This
trend has more pros than cons which I will substantiate in my upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples.
Living in apartments
has become common in people. Firstly
, folks like students and employees who work or study in huge cities, they found limited space
of flat is affordable for them. They can take this
type of accommodation on
Change preposition
at
the
easy cost which can save their money. Correct article usage
an
For example
, a number of students who
are already paying a vast amount of money for their higher education, Correct pronoun usage
apply
therefore
, they
think if they live in tiny Correct pronoun usage
apply
apartments
it will be easy to manage their lodging expenses.Secondly
, a tiny flat can be easily maintained and also
organized in a good way. Even though,
limited Remove the comma
apply
space
of flats don't require so much stuff in it and merely keep your necessary things. Despite Correct pronoun usage
its merits
merits
Add a comma
,merits
this
trend also
has a number of drawbacks.
People who have big families if think about buying the average size of apartment then
it can be extremely hard for them to manage in limited space
. However
, like a joint family where all family members will live together, it looks messy and nonadjustable, in light of the fact that they need large space
to live. Additionally
, afamily
who have young children Correct your spelling
a family
family
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
need courtyard
or outside area, where their children can play in Correct article usage
a courtyard
free
time. Correct pronoun usage
their free
Hence
, tiny apartments
are not come
with extra outside Change to the active voice
do not come
have not come
space
where people can go and sit to take refresh air.
To summarize, I believe that, small apartments
are good for nuclear family and those who live individually. However
, this
limited space
of flats is not perfect for vast families, and those who don't have a habitat to live in a tidy or narrow space
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...