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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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It is true that
people
 have different views about using
computers
 in the study. A number of
people
 consider it is a negative trend , whilst others believe
this
 is a positive development . I personally tend to agree with the latter view. As for the former view , some
people
 opine , if
pupils
 or students use
computers
 more ,it may affect their vision .
Moreover
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 the majority of
pupils
 or students tend to play computer games . If they utilize it more ,they may play games more .
As a result
 , not only they could fall they their eyesight , but
also
 lose their point .
Therefore
 that
people
 ignore
this
 statement. In spite of the above arguments , I still retain my position in
this
 matter .
Lessons
 are more interesting with
computers
 for
pupils
 because they watch some videos or pictures in order to understand
lessons
 fully . It can help to improve
pupils
 knowledge . Actually , it really useful for some
pupils
 , who lose their interests in
lessons
 . Since after using it ,they
tostart
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to start
start
 be active in
lessons
 . A prime example of
this
 could be my classmate
,
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because he does not pay attention to
lessons
 . But our English teacher uses it
then
 he becomes more active in the lesson . That's why
this
 argue superior for me . In conclusion ,
although
 using
computers
 in education has some disadvantages , I think
conversely
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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