Some people say that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Rewarding pupils is one of the conspicuous pillars of enhancing the education system. Recently,

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scheme has become a controversial topic. Whereas some citizens are of the view that it should be based on academic results, others, including me, opine it should depend on the academic progress of the

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because

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possibly enhances his future prospects and personality. On the one hand, motivating

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is the principal reason why some people consider rewarding a

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who achieves the highest score.

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incentivizes

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to be more dedicated and engaging

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their lessons.

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keen to mention

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prize as an authentic example as the nominees and winners of

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prize are usually individuals who make the most influential contribution in their field. Not only does

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prize motivate them to offer more positive contributions, but it

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incentivizes many of these winners’ colleagues to work and achieve breakthroughs. As

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example makes it clear, if we

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would possibly make them more successful and motivate their peers to pursue academic success.

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, I would side with those who contend that

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scheme should be based on the pupil’s academic progress.

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possibly reinforces a

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self-esteem since he realizes that his effort will probably enable him to achieve several targets. The likelihood of following a progression-based rewarding method is building a healthy personality of a

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rewarding system is enhancing a

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future prospects. Many

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find studying is boring and by offering them

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continuous support and

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they likely attract to their lessons.

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illustrated by the findings of pedagogy study conducted by the

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cooperation council (GCC) in August 2020, which emphasized that the changing in rewarding

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in Saudi governmental schools to decorate

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who show obvious improvements rather than

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achieve

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score, resulted in reducing about 92% in the number of the

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who left education from 1970 to 2020.

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shows that if teachers show their appreciation to a

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who made

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improvement and award him,

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would likely enhance

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academic future. To conclude, despite the importance of motivating

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by rewarding the pupils who get

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marks, I believe that showing improvement is a prerequisite to

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them because of the positive influences of

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on a

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personality and education prospects.