The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph presents the registration of international and Australian
students
in Australian universities for a decade. According to
the data, both the entry of foreign students
and the native students
went up over the course of 10 years while
there are more domestic students
relatively.
Generally, the number
of overseas students
seems to have a similar trend at the start of the semester and the end and the number
of students
is merely above 80 thousand in 2010. Since they move to Australia decided
to study there, meanwhile, citizens have options to study abroad.
Correct word choice
and decided
However
, in the account of the second
graph, there seem to be more students
of ted above 600 thousand by the end of the semester in 2010 which is way above the number
of international students
. Obviously, more Australians will attend their national university out of convenience and at a lower cost while
international students
may be in a lesser number
.Submitted by Shwe Yamin on
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