The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph presents the registration of international and Australian
students
in Australian universities for a decade. Use synonyms
According to
the data, both the entry of foreign Linking Words
students
and the native Use synonyms
students
went up over the course of 10 years Use synonyms
while
there are more domestic Linking Words
students
relatively.
Generally, the Use synonyms
number
of overseas Use synonyms
students
seems to have a similar trend at the start of the semester and the end and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
is merely above 80 thousand in 2010. Since they move to Australia Use synonyms
decided
to study there, meanwhile, citizens have options to study abroad.
Correct word choice
and decided
However
, in the account of the Linking Words
second
graph, there seem to be more Linking Words
students
of ted above 600 thousand by the end of the semester in 2010 which is way above the Use synonyms
number
of international Use synonyms
students
. Obviously, more Australians will attend their national university out of convenience and at a lower cost Use synonyms
while
international Linking Words
students
may be in a lesser Use synonyms
number
.Use synonyms
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