Many assume that the goal of every country should be produce more materials and goods . To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal ?
Some individuals opine that the
production
of raw materials and items
in a large quantity is the main target of every nation . I partially agree with this
view because dilemmas about manufacturing are skyrocketing or not .
On the one hand , I agree to increase the production
of materials by countries . In other words
, goods are very essential things for human beings in order to survive as they are an inseparable part of their life , while without this
there is impossible to do mankind's development . For an instance , cloth and food items
are basic things of life and they consume for daily purposes . If a ministry of authority put any restrictions on manufacturing firms in order that minimise it , this
will lead to a shortage of grocery items
and garments . Furthermore
, it jumps the prices of that items
.
On the other hand
, I disagree with it due to more production
of goods mean more pollution in the atmosphere. In other words
, chimneys of industries emit thousands of hazardous gases and chemicals in the air ,as a consequence, it creates air pollution and finally
, increases the problem of global warming . The best illustration for that textiles industries throws harmful toxins into the surrounding so it raises the issue of air pollution.
In conclusion , I partially agree with it because materials and goods are very necessary for their survival so it will impossible to judge that the production
of those things stop or not .Submitted by himanshumali90 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite