Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

This

Linking Words

is currently a contentious argument over whether administrations supposedly reduce the expenses on every

branches

Change to a singular noun

branch

show examples

of

arts

Use synonyms

and transfer that capital to the public services. I totally disagree with

this

Linking Words

opinion because

arts

Use synonyms

are bounded with every other

aspects

Change to a singular noun

aspect

show examples

of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

life and

secondly

Linking Words

it has a soul that makes our lives beautiful and enjoyable.

Firstly

Linking Words

the

the

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

arts

Use synonyms

is not something

seperated

Correct your spelling

separated

separate

from anything else in the world that we are living in.

Therefore

Linking Words

the definition of wasting money is

an

Change the article

a

show examples

horrible

notion

Use synonyms

to think of. The

first

Linking Words

reason is keeping the balance of everything. To illustrate

this

Linking Words

imagine a world which only has robotic employees, ignorant employers, unaesthetic buildings, bad-designed

softwares

Correct your spelling

software

Softwares

, unergonomic tools and endless examples like these. It sounds like strangulating in ascended capitalism and

this

Linking Words

is exactly something we

dont

Correct your spelling

don't

need.

Linking Words

Secondly

Add a comma

,Secondly

show examples

the worst part of reducing all the efforts towards the

arts

Use synonyms

will be affecting our education system.

The society

Correct article usage

Society

show examples

will have only several

type

Change to a plural noun

types

show examples

of person and

as a

Linking Words

result

Add a comma

,result

show examples

there will be no

imaginery

Correct your spelling

imaginary

and not

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

inventions as often as it was. Another reason why I do not support the

notion

Use synonyms

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

that spending the funds of

arts

Use synonyms

in public services

instead

Linking Words

of the

arts

Use synonyms

is related

with

Change preposition

to

show examples

happiness.

Firstly

Linking Words

every action that has been taken on the earth has the same goal ultimately; to being happy. If the governments had taken a sudden decision like cutting off the expenses of the

arts

Use synonyms

and transfer them to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

public services, that would have caused a revolt in many younger groups of people.

As a

Linking Words

result

Add a comma

,result

show examples

it might be

very

Correct article usage

a very

show examples

expensive decision to take due to

destructive

Correct article usage

the destructive

show examples

effects of protests. I conclusion, ı

compeletly

Correct your spelling

completely

disagree that the

notion

Use synonyms

of spending the money that belongs to the

arts

Use synonyms

and

it's

Correct your spelling

its

show examples

subjects for something else because it can not be separated from

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

life itself and eventually it would

brings

Change the verb form

bring

show examples

only unhappiness and destruction to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society. Given

this

Linking Words

situation, it seems that today's routine is not the best but it is very much better for the

notion

Use synonyms

which we have discussed.