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Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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people are
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 on
electronics
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 gadgets. Many people think that nowadays, youth is dependent on technology
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 as mobile phone to read and write. They are concerned that it has
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 impact on the children. In my opinion, I agree with the statement to some extent and
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 believe it has some benefits too.
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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 to complete their homework and assignment. With
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, children's writing is affected. They prefer to use acronyms. Almost all the
smart phone
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 install with
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a keyboard
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 that has spelling checking software. many
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the exact spelling they use
spell
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 checker to correct
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 word.
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school
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 a spell check quiz was conducted in which 95%
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students
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 did not know the exact spellings.
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, student's reading skills are
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 not good because they prefer to take
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 from
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Google. They just
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 the lecture. They
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 do not know how to spell
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.
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, some people believe that with technology it makes pupils life easier. They make assignment quickly without any hesitation. They
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 show interest in lecture while listening rather than reading.
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 it was found that
students
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tecnology
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technology
 and their grades improve. To conclude, In my opinion, reading and writing skills are declined because of smartphone spell checker software.
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,
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 show interest in the studies and improve their grades.

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