The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location
The pictures provide information regarding a turbine structure
as well as
where its places
in optimum spots.
We can be seen that a Wrong verb form
placed
wind - generator
machine is composed of a high steel tower and three blades to generate the amount of Correct your spelling
wind-generator
wind
. To be more precise, Blades made of fibreglass or wood that connected with a wind
sensor to show the direction of the wind
as well as
wind
speed. Moreover
, that machine produces 1.5 megawatts of wind
power harnesses. In addition
, the information is received from a computer , which controls three blades to determine an accurate direction and angle.
As is shown in the second
diagram, the locations of wind
turbines bring different drawbacks and benefits to harness
Change the verb form
harnessing
wind
power. When a turbine wind
is installed on the hillside where strength position to collect
strong Change the verb form
collects
wind
about
1.5 megawatts. Change preposition
of about
Similarly
, a wind
turbine installation also
exposes the amount of wind
in the sea, the
landscape Correct word choice
and the
not
spoil. Add a missing verb
does not
However
, a wind
machine is placed on the rooftop to impact on wind
-power generator. This
is due to
the fact that the wind
level is lower to just create 100 kilowatts.
In conclusion, it can be witness
that three machines place Change the verb form
be witnessed
the
different Correct article usage
apply
position
and the air strengths depend on the location to produce Fix the agreement mistake
positions
wind
power.Submitted by caomyphuong3004 on
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