Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produce

It is certainly true that today's lifestyle has become so insensitive and uncivil
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ever. The level on which the
waste
produce
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products
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have been raising is unimaginable. As a consequence, there
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been many impacts on
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ecosystem. There are
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of reasons behind
this
;
firstly
, unwanted use of plastic and other packaging material leading to piles of wastage. Companies in order to maintain the durability of their product
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not to increase the cost of
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; use non-degradable materials in packaging.
Moreover
, there is no proper
waste
management system used by the factories and industries which is one of the major causes of
waste
.
Secondly
, there are no proper rules applied
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household rubbish. People do not differentiate the
waste
according to its degradability leading to difficulty in
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this
waste
.
Consequently
,
environment
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is impacted and it becomes difficult to quantify
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waste
. There are plenty of ways in which government can put efforts to reduce
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waste
.
To begin
with, the already imposed laws on
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sector should be revived and made more rigid so that these sectors are monitored and charged for any breach of rules.
Secondly
,
general
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public should be educated on how to collect and
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their
waste
. Along with, many facilities at public places should be made available so that
waste
management is made easy. To supplement
this
,
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law should be imposed on household
waste
. In conclusion, adequate facilities, proper education, new rules and regulations would help in reducing
waste
.
However
, considering our climate and mother earth, we should regulate
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and should
tale
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take
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active steps to manage and reduce
waste
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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