Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performances from screen and no need to watch it live. Do you agree or disagree?
Firstly
, seeing shows online can be convenient and less costly. Linking Words
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the
technology, there are various sources available to watch shows later Correct article usage
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such
as a television, a computer, a laptop and a phone. Linking Words
People
can sit at home and watch the show without paying a huge amount of money Use synonyms
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For example
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people
may travel to another city just to attend a concert; Use synonyms
as a result
of which they might end up spending a lot of money on travelling and on the entry ticket which they can save if they watch it later on television at home. Linking Words
Therefore
, youngsters can enjoy Linking Words
show
with their family by saving Add an article
the show
a show
cost
of travelling and their energy.
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the cost
Secondly
, working professionals prefer watching shows online rather than present streaming. Linking Words
This
is due to the fact that Linking Words
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because of their frenetic work schedule; Correct article usage
the past
as a result
, they do not get time to get entertained. Linking Words
This
can be resolved if the event is been recorded on the device and watched later as per Linking Words
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convenient time. Correct article usage
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For instance
, a working mother can record her favourite musical performance if she is not getting time from household work and watch it later on phone.
In conclusion, performances can be watched later on various platforms Linking Words
instead
of watching it live. I totally agree with Linking Words
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notion as it provides to working Linking Words
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and saves the cost of entry pass. In the future, there will be more platforms to broadcast Use synonyms
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live shows that can benefit humans.Correct article usage
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