Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays
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individuals’ life. It is often argued that
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violence spreads widely among
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these types of content presented by
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. I strongly agree with
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statement. The more brutality shown by TV, the more crime rates would be in a society. Some
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tend to imitate the
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shown on television. Many films produced based on various crimes
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as child abuse, slaughter and burglary which contains lots of fierceness. Watching regularly these kinds of movies would
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in expanding bad
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among
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especially young viewers. If the main character plays as a criminal, his devotees would be persuaded to behave like him.
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, most of the News broadcasted are full of harsh incidents all around the world. The stressful news causes anxiety in the society which surges aggressiveness in
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of different types of social
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like Instagram and Facebook many
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influenced by the content
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them.
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, some individuals share
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images full of harshness in order to attract others’ attention and find followers. In
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regard, these Medias act like a teacher for them. Some terrorists
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their methods and ways via
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teenagers would be influenced.
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, the most famous group “DAESH” has been grown by spreading violent images and movies through different
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, many youngsters joined them in
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way. In conclusion, I agree with the view that violence in
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society and broadcasting them should be limited by governments which could be effective in decreasing the crime rates in a country.
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