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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that the
internet
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 is developing day by day. But there are many who think that the
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 isolates
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 with each other, while others, including me believe that the
internet
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 makes
people
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 closer. There are two main reasons why it could be argued that the
internet
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 isolates
people
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 with each other.
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, many students prefer to stay at home and preparing for their exams online.
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, majority of students nowadays preparing for their exams online using the
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. At the result they hardly ever meet with each other.
Secondly
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 due to the
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 a lot of
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 can not spend their much time with their family.
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, majority of
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 do their daily activities on the
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such
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 as: listening to music, playing online games, watching films, various type of videos. At the result they can not find the time for their family. In spite of these arguments, I believe that the
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 makes
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 closer.
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, they make friends easily and can see their close
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 on the
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 and various websites. Nowadays on the
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 everything is available: they can be more closer to society and to
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.
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 they have a chance to know a lot of information about their interested
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such
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 as actors and actresses. In conclusion while there are some reasons to think that the
internet
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 isolates
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 and communities, my own view is that the
internet
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 makes
people
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 closer.

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