Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the
internet
is developing day by day. But there are many who think that the
internet
isolates
people
with each other, while others, including me believe that the
internet
makes
people
closer. There are two main reasons why it could be argued that the
internet
isolates
people
with each other.
Firstly
, many students prefer to stay at home and preparing for their exams online.
For example
, majority of students nowadays preparing for their exams online using the
internet
. At the result they hardly ever meet with each other.
Secondly
due to the
internet
a lot of
people
can not spend their much time with their family.
For example
, majority of
people
do their daily activities on the
internet
such
as: listening to music, playing online games, watching films, various type of videos. At the result they can not find the time for their family. In spite of these arguments, I believe that the
internet
makes
people
closer.
For example
, they make friends easily and can see their close
people
on the
internet
and various websites. Nowadays on the
internet
everything is available: they can be more closer to society and to
people
.
Also
they have a chance to know a lot of information about their interested
people
such
as actors and actresses. In conclusion while there are some reasons to think that the
internet
isolates
people
and communities, my own view is that the
internet
makes
people
closer.
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