Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that the

internet

is developing day by day. But there are many who think that the

internet

isolates

people

with each other, while others, including me believe that the

internet

makes

people

closer. There are two main reasons why it could be argued that the

internet

isolates

people

with each other.

Firstly

, many students prefer to stay at home and preparing for their exams online.

For example

, majority of students nowadays preparing for their exams online using the

internet

. At the result they hardly ever meet with each other.

Secondly

due to the

internet

a lot of

people

can not spend their much time with their family.

For example

, majority of

people

do their daily activities on the

internet

such

as: listening to music, playing online games, watching films, various type of videos. At the result they can not find the time for their family. In spite of these arguments, I believe that the

internet

makes

people

closer.

For example

, they make friends easily and can see their close

people

on the

internet

and various websites. Nowadays on the

internet

everything is available: they can be more closer to society and to

people

Also

they have a chance to know a lot of information about their interested

people

such

as actors and actresses. In conclusion while there are some reasons to think that the

internet

isolates

people

and communities, my own view is that the

internet

makes

people

closer.

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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