Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Some employers have
uniforms
for their
employees
that
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to be worn each working day.
This
essay argues that
although
employees
having
uniforms
on
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, sells the brand and creates uniformity among
workers
, there are
also
drawbacks which are; boring wearing
same
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attire
everyday
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and
also
makes
employees
uncomfortable.
Employees
have to be dressed in uniform in certain companies because it does sell the brand of companies. Just as a product is sold, so is a brand sold not only to showcase the features but
also
gain and build of what is known for.
In addition
, it makes
workers
look the same when at work.
This
is by a fact that they can easily be identified by consumers wherever they go and be able to reach
to
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more clients.
Therefore
, being of more benefit to both consumer and company.
For example
,
safaricom
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company in Kenya uses
same
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uniform
to
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all her
workers
both those in the field and at the office.
However
, there are drawbacks associated with having
uniforms
in most organisations,
this
is because
they
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maybe
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uncomfortable.
In other words
, one in a very hot climate with heavy
uniforms
put on
,
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makes an employee uncomfortable but because of no alternative way, one has to persevere. To add
on
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that, it may become
a
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boredom to
workers
. When people get used to something, they do think of diversification but since it is a uniform you have no option but
be
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in it
everyday
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.
For example
, military heavy attire can be removed
nomatter
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no matter
the are one is posted when at duty. To conclude,
uniforms
have to be worn while working because it makes people know
employees
faster and company name known more to people.
However
,it is not that comfortable
to
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all
workers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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