Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
Some employers have
uniforms
for their employees
that
is
to be worn each working day. Change the verb form
are
This
essay argues that although
employees
having uniforms
on
, sells the brand and creates uniformity among Change preposition
apply
workers
, there are also
drawbacks which are; boring wearing same
attire Correct article usage
the same
everyday
and Replace the word
every day
also
makes employees
uncomfortable.
Employees
have to be dressed in uniform in certain companies because it does sell the brand of companies. Just as a product is sold, so is a brand sold not only to showcase the features but also
gain and build of what is known for. In addition
, it makes workers
look the same when at work. This
is by a fact that they can easily be identified by consumers wherever they go and be able to reach to
more clients. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, being of more benefit to both consumer and company. For example
, safaricom
company in Kenya uses Change the capitalization
Safaricom
same
uniform Change the article
the same
to
all her Change preposition
for
workers
both those in the field and at the office.
However
, there are drawbacks associated with having uniforms
in most organisations, this
is because they
Add a verb
arethey
werethey
Correct your spelling
may be
maybe
uncomfortable. Correct your spelling
may be
In other words
, one in a very hot climate with heavy uniforms
put on,
makes an employee uncomfortable but because of no alternative way, one has to persevere. To add Remove the comma
apply
on
that, it may become Change preposition
to
a
boredom to Remove the article
apply
workers
. When people get used to something, they do think of diversification but since it is a uniform you have no option but be
in it Fix the infinitive
to be
everyday
. Replace the word
every day
For example
, military heavy attire can be removed nomatter
the are one is posted when at duty.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
no matter
uniforms
have to be worn while working because it makes people know employees
faster and company name known more to people. However
,it is not that comfortable to
all Change preposition
for
workers
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