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INFORMATION CONCERNING THE ATTENDANCE FIGURES OF FOUR DISTINCT MUSEUMS IN LONDON FROM JUNE TO DECEMBER IS DEPICTED IN THE GIVEN BAR CHART.

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INFORMATION CONCERNING THE ATTENDANCE FIGURES OF FOUR DISTINCT
MUSEUMS
 IN LONDON FROM JUNE TO DECEMBER IS DEPICTED IN THE GIVEN BAR CHART. OVERALL, WHAT IS NOTABLE FROM THE CHART IS THAT EXCEPT FOR THE
BRITISH
MUSEUM
 WHICH GREW IN
POPULARRITY
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POPULARITY
, THE OTHERS SAW STEEP AND MODERATE DECLINES AT THE END OF THE GIVEN PERIOD. IN JUNE, THE HISTORY
MUSEUM
, THE
BRITISH
MUSEUM
 AND THE SCIENCE
MUSEUM
 HAD SIMILAR FIGURES,
RAGING
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 FROM 410,000 TO 430,000, WHILE THAT FOR THE NATIONAL
MUSEUM
 WAS TWO-FOLD LOWER THAN THE THREE (200,000). A MONTH AFTER, THESE NUMBERS DECLINED GRADUALLY WITH THE EXCEPTION
FOR
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 THE
BRITISH
MUSEUM
 WHICH REMAINED STABLE. AUGUST SAW A SHIFT IN THE PATTERN, AS THE NUMBER OF ADMISSIONS FOR THE HISTORY AND THE
BRITISH
MUSEUMS
 SOARED TO ALMOST 600,000 AND 710,000, IN TURN. MEANWHILE, THE FIGURE FOR THE NATIONAL
MUSEUM
 MAINTAINED ITS JULY'S FIGURE OF ABOUT 400,000, WHILE THAT FOR THE NATIONAL
MUSEUM
 DOUBLED TO 390,000. BY SEPTEMBER, THE FIGURES FALLEN BACK TO 390,000, 590,00, AND 200,000 FOR THE HISTORY, THE
BRITISH
 AND THE
NATAIONAL
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NATIONAL
MUSEUMS
, RESPECTIVELY. THE OUTLIER, THE SCIENCE
MUSUEM
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MUSEUM
,
ON THE OTHER
HAND
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 GREW BY 100,000 TO REACH ITS HIGHEST RECORDED FIGURE AT 500,000. AT THE END OF THE PERIOD, THE
QUANTIY
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QUANTITY
 OF VISITORS TO ALL FOUR
MUSEUMS
FURTHER
 DECLINED,
ALTHOUGH
 THE
BRITISH
MUSEUM
 REMAINED TO HAVE THE HIGHEST NUMBER OF VISITS MADE AMONG THE FOUR
MUSEUMS
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