Some people think that foreign language should be introduced to children at kindergarten level while others dis-agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Whether or not the kindergarten kids should learn their
second
language
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issue of interest. While many believe that it is essential to teach their
children
foreign
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language
since they were
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kindergarten,
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some
disagree with
this
.
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are loads
of reasons to support those who agree with
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statement. One of them is to give their
children
opportunities
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the
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further
occasions. As they said, if their kids have
a
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knowledge of
second
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language
, they are a step
further
leading comparing to others. To elaborate more about
this
is that if there
are
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a foreign company wanting to recruit the employee that
have
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to reach their requirement of ability to speak a foreign
language
, those who are able to do it will have more chances to be selected. On the other hands, forcing them to get to know a
second
language
too early may
also
cause disadvantages. If the parents force their
children
to study
language
and it turns out that the kids did not enjoy learning it
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to its complexity,
this
may make them hate and think that languages are their weak point which is terribly bad
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their mental health.
For instance
, I was forced to
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chinese
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Chinese
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, which is not my
favorite
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language
, when I was young and there
was
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thousands of words to remember that I could not manage to
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doit
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. After that
this
made me hate
chinese
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. In conclusion,
although
there are pros and cons
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introducing
children
at kindergarten a foreign
language
, I personally agree with
this
but with a condition that person learning it
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to interest in it as well,
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it may cause lots of unexpected results.
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