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Some people think that foreign language should be introduced to children at kindergarten level while others dis-agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #language #children #kindergarten #level #dis-agree
Whether or not the kindergarten kids should learn their
second
language
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 issue of interest. While many believe that it is essential to teach their
children
foreign
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language
 since they were
at
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 kindergarten,
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some
 disagree with
this
.
This
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are loads
 of reasons to support those who agree with
this
 statement. One of them is to give their
children
 opportunities
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the
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further
 occasions. As they said, if their kids have
a
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knowledge of
second
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language
, they are a step
further
 leading comparing to others. To elaborate more about
this
 is that if there
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 a foreign company wanting to recruit the employee that
have
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 to reach their requirement of ability to speak a foreign
language
, those who are able to do it will have more chances to be selected. On the other hands, forcing them to get to know a
second
language
 too early may
also
 cause disadvantages. If the parents force their
children
 to study
language
 and it turns out that the kids did not enjoy learning it
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 to its complexity,
this
 may make them hate and think that languages are their weak point which is terribly bad
to
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 their mental health.
For instance
, I was forced to
learned
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chinese
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Chinese
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, which is not my
favorite
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favourite
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language
, when I was young and there
was
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 thousands of words to remember that I could not manage to
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do it
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doit
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. After that
this
 made me hate
chinese
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Chinese
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. In conclusion,
although
 there are pros and cons
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 introducing
children
 at kindergarten a foreign
language
, I personally agree with
this
 but with a condition that person learning it
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 to interest in it as well,
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 it may cause lots of unexpected results.
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