Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

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One of the most important concerns of environmentalists is the pollution of the rivers, seas and
lakes
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.
People
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who care for nature and planet earth are seeking to protect
waters
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from pollution. I think the main reason for
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problem is industrial
wastes
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. Industries are now dumping an increasing amount of
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into the earth's oceans. These
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include radioactive components of the nuclear sites, hospital, biomedical, and petroleum
wastes
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. Nuclear
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are so dangerous that they must be deposited in the deep holes into the earth's subsurface with lead shields to keep radiation waves from leakage out.
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, some countries do not pay attention to these safety protocols and dump them into the seas and oceans.
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, oil companies can cause enormous environmental issues.
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, a few years ago, one of the oil wells of the BP company blasted, and an unbelievable amount of oil spread out into the sea and polluted all the
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around from the rivers to
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. It killed thousands of
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. Industrial
wastes
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pollute the earth’s
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, which put the lives of all living creaturs directly and indirectly in danger. Toxic
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can lead to the death of aquatics, which indirectly affects the lack of food both for humans and animals
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as birds who consume
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fishes
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or bears who capture the river
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.
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, polluting the
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infect the underground and potable
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that make
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sick. It
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can ruin agricultural products and damage the trees.
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, the
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from the
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factory in the United States that manufactured Tefal pans and pots cause all nearby
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such
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as
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and rivers to be poisoned.
People
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got serious diseases, some of them had painful death, many trees were destroyed, and many
fishes
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died because of that toxic water. In conclusion, water pollution
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of unloading industrial
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impacts all humans, wildlife, and nature. It has the potential to kills animals, makes
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sick, damages trees and agricultural products. The government must intervene by making new preventative laws.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contamination
  • industrial discharge
  • untreated sewage
  • agricultural runoff
  • pesticides
  • oil spills
  • microplastics
  • eutrophication
  • algal blooms
  • marine dumping
  • bioaccumulation
  • ecosystem
  • biodiversity
  • public health
  • waterborne diseases
  • fishing industry
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental regulations
  • waste management
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