Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate about how competitive children should be. One group of people believes that a sense of

competition

is a great quality that

kids

should possess. In others opinion, it is better for the little ones to be taught to co-operate

instead

rather than compete

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because that would make them valuable individuals in the future.

This

essay will discuss both of the viewpoints, but I personally think, that

kids

should learn both.

Firstly

, I definitely believe that a sense of

competition

remains an important quality,

that is

vital for a

person

's life.

For instance

, if someone wants a particular work position, the only thing that would motivate

this

person

to fight for the job is if he has to compete with someone and beat him.

Additionally

, it is a well-known fact, that after a big

competition

every win is sweeter, which means the

person

who won would be happier after beating somebody because that shows that he earned the win fair and square. Encouraging

competition

at a younger age helps

kids

also

to learn how to stand up for themselves and to express their opinion freely.

This

knowledge will assist them in different situations in life

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when they will have to make a difficult decision.

However

, the other side of the debate claims that it is better for the

kids

to be taught cooperation,

instead

of

competition

. I wholeheartedly believe, that knowing how and when to collaborate remains again a vital piece of knowledge that every

person

should have. Cooperation represents

for example

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teamwork work

, which is a quality that every company looks at in

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employees, every group of friends expects from the new member, and every

person

looks into their spouse.

Besides

, it is always a great idea to just collaborate

instead

of working alone on something, just like the saying goes "the

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teamwork work

is the dream work". If

kids

succeed in learning that at a younger age,

then

they will be the most valuable individuals in the world. In conclusion, I personally believe, that the sense of

competition

and co-operation are equally essential for a

person

's life. With

this

type of qualities, people will succeed in both personal and career aspect. Becoming the knowledge youngsters will become more useful adults and will develop their personal character at a great level.