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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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The
libraries
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 are repositories of never-ending knowledge as
books
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. Every
people
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 knows the significance of
books
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. Some individuals opine that the government should provide
libraries
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 in every town
that is
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 absolutely free.
However
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, others feel that
people
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 have
internet
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 facilities in their home. Despite
this
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, providing free
libraries
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 are a wastage of money.
This
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 assignment indeed discusses both perspectives and I shall analyse my views. On the one hand, establishing free
libraries
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 is beneficial for poor
people
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 and students. Both needs
books
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 to achieve their dreams. If
people
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 are educated
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 they able to get a job which can give them a good lifestyle. All these possible if they get a free
book
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 that can only provide through the library which cannot access any cost of them.
Secondly
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, many traditional and historical
books
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 are only available in the library. These kinds of
books
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 are not accessible in ordinary bookshops.
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, many great poets and writers like Shakespeare, their
books
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 are only at present in the
libraries
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.
People
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 who adore him or get to know him will go to the library and read his
books
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.
On the other hand
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, in the era of technology, every person has their own
internet
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 connection at their home. Many sites are available on the
internet
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 which can provide free e-
books
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 to users. Providing free
libraries
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 are spoiling money.
Instead
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 of
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, there are many areas that need money to reconstruct or re-establish. Even though
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 reading a
book
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 is some boring to some
people
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, in spite of
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,
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internet
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the internet
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 can allow them an audio file of many
books
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.
People
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 can listen to the whole
book
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 that can interest to hear a
book
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 like a story. In conclusion, I believe that the government should provide free
libraries
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 which have many benefits.
This
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 helps
people
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 to read
books
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 free. They can learn and educate themselves, they adjust need the right
book
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 to read.
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