Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

Humans have become a prime culprit for the destruction of the
wildlife
population around the
world
. Humans believe that they are the most powerful species on
this
planet and have
therefore
chosen to use all of nature’s
resources
for their own good, even if
this
results in the destruction of the environment around them. Clearly,
this
is not a positive result of human existence and many people believe that the
world
’s
wildlife
population should be better protected. One possible way to protect
wildlife
around the
world
is to reduce the
amount
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of
polluted
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substances produced through the human way of life. It has become habitual for people to pollute water by adding chemicals to it during industrial processes or to pollute
air
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as a result
of the fossil fuel industries and car emissions. Stopping the addition of chemicals to water and creating cleaner processes would reduce water pollution and help create a safer environment for
wildlife
to live in. Increasing the availability and use of public transportation and increasing the use of renewable energy sources could reduce
world
pollution
further
. Another possible attempt to protect
wildlife
around the
world
is to actively promote recycling projects to reduce the
amount
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of
resources
that are wasted.
This
would lessen the degradation of the natural environment, as humans continue to search for new
resources
. Society uses a lot of paper and wood on a daily basis and people do not actively think about whether or not they are wasting these
resources
. Printing double-sided or on recycled paper
for example
would appear to change nothing, yet if carried out regularly would help make a difference. In conclusion, there are numerous different ways in which every human being can help to protect the
wildlife
population around the
world
. One can engage in projects to raise awareness of environmental destruction or one can actively take part in activities to protect it. Everyone must find the area in which he or she would like to involve him or herself, as all should be obliged to protect
wildlife
around the
world
.
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