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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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These days some people believe that scientists should be allowed to transmit signals to external
life
forms
 while others say that it might be too hazardous. I strongly advocate that it is too risky for humanity to accomplish
such
 researches, due to the fact that there will be many repercussions. On the one hand, sending messages into space may be beneficial in the way of enhancing scientific patents and cultivating our knowledge of the other
species
.
That is
 to say, inconceivable breakthroughs may occur and people may start interacting with other types of intelligent
life
forms
, which can result in comprehensive cognition about external
species
.
For instance
, in a book of the prevalent scientist, it was said that when human beings reach aliens, it will be feasible for people to start doing unimaginable things like fully discovering the space or finding other
species
 that resemble them.
On the other hand
, there is ample evidence that announcing the existence of external
life
forms
 may cause chaos across the globe.
Consequently
, it will lead to disagreements between two
species
, which may destroy the infrastructure of both planets.
For example
, a recent survey has revealed that it is too dangerous for humans to detect new types of
life
forms
, due to the fact that it will cause the invasion of other
species
 that might be not welcome in our world. To conclude, even though I provided arguments for both sides, I firmly believe that scientists should not be let to convey signals to other types of
life
forms
, since it has a vast number of consequences.
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