In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
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essay will consider the main causes of rising Linking Words
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life
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expectancy
, before proposing two possible solutions .
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expectancy
is the number of Use synonyms
people
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government
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taxes
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countries
then
the tax rate would be balanced to a great extent .
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life
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the number of Change preposition
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the proportion
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government
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this
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the retirement
age
and encourage immigration .Use synonyms
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