In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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expect to live more than ever before. In many nations around the world , growth

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will go higher .

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, before proposing two possible solutions . Perhaps the most important cause of

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is the number of

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who retired at an early

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, if the proportion of

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who retired is increasing , the load on the government will be rising

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as a pension , the government is always giving a pension for

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on the economy .Another key factor is the percentage

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young

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who will look after elderly

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will be declining .

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means that the young

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who need to work at least 12 hours per day because of the

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,

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will bear to pay

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at an old

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and that’s difficult . Fortunately ,

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,there are two promising solutions to

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problem.

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of all, the evacuation

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, the ministry should be increase the

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of retirement so the individual can be able to take care of themselves .

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, encourage immigration .

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means the

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authorities should advocate immigration to increase the number of young public who will pay

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, if foreign folk tend to move into other countries ,

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the tax rate would be balanced to a great extent . In conclusion , rising in average

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of life is a serious problem which is primarily caused by

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number of retirement

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, along with the proportion of

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population who will afford

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. I recommend that the government address

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issue by increasing the retirement

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and encourage immigration .