More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays,modern lifestyle has
treating
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people
in
harmful
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a harmful
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way
such
as
health
issue
, there are
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amount of
people
strggul
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struggle
with
this
. Some
people
believe that the old
way
medicine
should take back into the
trement
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treatment
wridly
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wildly
widely
as the modern
trement
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treatment
not as good to treat the
health
issue
. In my opinion, I
totaly
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totally
agree with
this
. There are
sevearl
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several
reastions
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reasons
reactions
to support my view.
First
of all, I believe the traditional
medicine
such
as herps are work
effectelly
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effectively
and less
sideeffect
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side effect
side effects
than the modern one, because most the
tradition
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herps are organi which has less
chimcal
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chemical
chemicals
and good for our body.
For example
, a year ago my busy work was
causeed
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caused
cause
me
strees
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stress
and I tried some
modren
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modern
medicines it
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to be fine at the
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beginning
,
however
, I
realied
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realised
realized
it cause me more stressful when I stop using it. While,
untill
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until
I found the
way
to use the traditional herps
trement
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treatment
, it treaded me
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without
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with out
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without
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any
sideeffects
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side effects
side-effects
.
Moreover
, the other vital
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reason
is the
tradition
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trement
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treatment
is
treats
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to treat
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the
health
issues from the root
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mental and
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physical
care. I believe nowadays busy and request rapid action lifestyle caused
people
such
as
ancity
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anxiety
,
strees
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stress
trees
and
overwight
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overweight
problems. For
ancity
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anxiety
city
entity
, it is
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mental
meant
issue
, if we could use meditation
threpy
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therapy
to
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treat
create
the person who
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this
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problem
instert
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insert
of the
chamical
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chemical
medicine
it would
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the person without the
sideeffect
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side effect
side effects
from the
chamical
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chemical
medicent
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medicine
and
also
it
lead
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the person
mentaly
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mentally
mental
health
.
In addition
,the best
way
to deal with
overwight
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overweight
problem is the
trandition
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traditional
tradition
transition
way
which
is do
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does
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execsic
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execs
to decrease
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, it much effect
than
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use
modren
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modern
medicene
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medicine
because
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execs
is the only and best
way
to
sovle
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solve
the
overwight
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overweight
issue
. In conclusion, compared to
the
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modern
medicine
I think the
trandition
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tradition
transition
trement
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treatment
has more
beneficts
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benefits
and it should
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stimulate
people
to
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consider
us
it
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apply
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more
expecile
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expensive
in nowadays.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • chronic conditions
  • holistic approach
  • preventive care
  • natural remedies
  • cultural heritage
  • ancestral knowledge
  • integration
  • complementary healthcare
  • regulation
  • standardization
  • scientific validation
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