It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together Include any relevant example from your experience

With the modern advances and fast pace
life
, relationships have taken a
second
place in the
life
of most
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people. It's a common scenario today that people are not attached to each other
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living in the same house and families are not as bonded with the gravity of love as they were before. Various reasons are there, behind it to make things worse. We will,
however
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main causes below.
First
and foremost among them, is lack of
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communication
between
parents
and their
children
and in between siblings.
Parents
,today, have more money and less
time
for their own
children
. Giving costly gifts and outings once or twice
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a month are not replacements
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small chit chat and quality
time
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basis that you can give to your child. In
this
way, elders
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in fact
, push them to a
materiastic
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materialistic
life
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that instinct in their offsprings that
consequently
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money driven
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and self-centred individual in the future.
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of gadgets and lack of understanding of each other's emotion are the problems standing tall in
this
regard. To make
children
sit in one place and not
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mess around,
parents
often hand over gadgets to them.
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them busy and they usually don't disturb
parents
time
by
time
;
however
, it
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to speech delays, lack of
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emotional
intelligence and communication power in these little kids. As
time
pass by, they learn to stay busy with these things and slowly start forgetting the humans and natural social needs around them.
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of gadgets have sharply
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the speech delays in
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young population. In my opinion,
parents
should start giving more
time
to
children
and less to their workplace to get close to them. Avoid living a materialistic
life
and engaging
children
more in house and nature are strong tools that are beneficial in
this
. Elders should stop using mobile phones and other
such
items in front of
children
and should focus on their social demands more. Above all they need to be more empathetic with these little creatures, keeping aside their own problems, so they will learn and practice the same behaviour once they grow up. All of these can
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eventually
lead to
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family system that we are lacking today but hopefully can be created in future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • family interactions
  • technological advancements
  • virtual interactions
  • dual-income households
  • urbanization
  • migration
  • social structures
  • individualism
  • family cohesiveness
  • belonging
  • open communication
  • emotional support
  • shared activities
  • family dynamics
  • work-life balance
  • family traditions
  • regular gatherings
  • counseling
  • family therapy
  • prioritizing family time
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