Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Artists were supported by authorities,
Although
some consider it as
futile and pointless.They are in an opinion that Change preposition
apply
these
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this ammount
ammount
that Correct your spelling
amounts
are spend
on Change the verb form
are spent
art
ought to be invested in any other sectors like healthcare,education and infrastructure.This
essay discuss
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discusses
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government
goverment
extending support to the Correct article usage
the goverment
people
who are involved in the profession of art
and strongly agrees with the view that funding should be in the feild
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field
medical
,learning and construction.
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of medical
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with, Beaurocrates should support art
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the art
industry
and people
who are working in that area.This
is beacause
these kind of industries are considerably small and individuals who are working as painter or actor they get Correct your spelling
because
less
wages when compared with Change the quantifier
fewer
other profession
.Change the wording
another profession
other professions
For instance
,India maximum funding done in the feild
of Correct your spelling
field
art
.Similarly
,If the goverment
takes Correct your spelling
government
this
kind of intiative
in supporting the film Correct your spelling
initiative
industry
by providing them with goverment
related projects,Correct your spelling
government
then
theses
actors and co-stars can earn a good sum of money.Correct your spelling
these
Moreover
,this
will also
help them to improve their standarad
of living.
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standard
On the other hand
,there are people
who believe that this
kind of support from the goverments
ought to be Correct your spelling
government
governments
intiated
for Correct your spelling
initiated
people
who work in the hospital sector and teachers,Despite spending impulsively on art
which is not even 10 % beneficial for the society.This
will motivate them to work for long
time and provide service to Change the article
a long
the
society.Correct article usage
apply
For Example
,Goverment
of United States of America they tremendously invested in Correct your spelling
Government
healthcare
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the healthcare
industry
,they could get aid from healthcare professional in the time of COVID 19.Likewise
other countries like Europe and Add a comma
,Likewise
japan
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Japan
also
invested in the feild
civil Correct your spelling
field
industry
and schools this
could gradually booms
their economy.
In conclusion,Change the verb form
boom
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,supporting art
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the art
industry
are
beneficial,but In my Change the verb form
is
view
it not as Add a comma
,view
much
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apply
essentail
as Correct your spelling
essential
alloting
funds for other hospitals,schools and Correct your spelling
allowing
allocating
buldings
.Correct your spelling
buildings
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