Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Artists were supported by authorities,

Although

some consider it

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futile and pointless.They are in an opinion that

these

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ammount

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amounts

that

are spend

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on

art

ought to be invested in any other sectors like healthcare,education and infrastructure.

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essay

discuss

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government

goverment

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the goverment

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extending support to the

people

who are involved in the profession of

art

and strongly agrees with the view that funding should be in the

feild

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field

medical

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,learning and construction.

To begin

with, Beaurocrates should support

art

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industry

and

people

who are working in that area.

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is

beacause

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because

these kind of industries are considerably small and individuals who are working as painter or actor they get

less

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wages when compared with

other profession

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another profession

other professions

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.

For instance

,India maximum funding done in the

feild

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field

of

art

.

Similarly

,If the

goverment

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government

takes

this

kind of

intiative

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initiative

in supporting the film

industry

by providing them with

goverment

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government

related projects,

then

theses

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actors and co-stars can earn a good sum of money.

Moreover

,

this

will

also

help them to improve their

standarad

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standard

of living.

On the other hand

,there are

people

who believe that

this

kind of support from the

goverments

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government

governments

ought to be

intiated

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initiated

for

people

who work in the hospital sector and teachers,Despite spending impulsively on

art

which is not even 10 % beneficial for the society.

This

will motivate them to work for

long

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time and provide service to

the

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society.

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,

Goverment

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Government

of United States of America they tremendously invested in

healthcare

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industry

,they could get aid from healthcare professional in the time of COVID 19.

Likewise

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other countries like Europe and

japan

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also

invested in the

feild

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field

civil

industry

and schools

this

could gradually

booms

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their economy. In conclusion,

Although

,supporting

art

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the art

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industry

are

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beneficial,but In my

view

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it not as

much

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essentail

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essential

as

alloting

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allowing

allocating

funds for other hospitals,schools and

buldings

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buildings

.