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Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions?

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These days,the
work
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 environment has been more competitive among the elderly and the youngest.The most important issue why old
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 need to
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 is probably an economical issue.Solutions should be done by the governments and charities.
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,less income force
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 to make more money.
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 is not just for young worker and
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 aged
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 may be needed to effort
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 of less income.
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,a couple whose age over 60 if they haven't retired yet they need to
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 as much as other
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 to pay their expenditures.
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,no matter the age you are it is a matter to have regular adequate income. There are few solutions to solve
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 issue
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 as authority should play a role for them by using their economic power or charities can play a role in helping aged
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 who can not have more energy to
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.
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 of all,
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 should give minimum wages without working.
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,in Turkey who is over 65 years old is deserved to get payment from the power that can be enough for them to buy some essential stuff.
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,charities can collect fund from the
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 and share that property with them.Due to ageing both charity and governments should play an important role in helping aged
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. In conclusion, poverty force individuals to make money at any age.
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 problem should be solved by the governments without any hesitation or question.
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,
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 duty should be solved by the authorities.I believe that one day no elder
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 will need to
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 in any workplace
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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