In many countries plastic bags are main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Pollution

being

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considered

as

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apply

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one of the major

source

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sources

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which

affect

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affects

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our health and environment

either

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whether

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it’s on

ocean

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the ocean

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or land .

Plastic

bags

are considered

as

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a

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major

source

of pollution both on land

as well as

in water .

Iam

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I am

fully agree with

this

foresaid

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aforesaid

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notion and in

this

essay

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essay,

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we will

we

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apply

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discuss some points which

proves

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prove

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this

is correct

Firstly

we know that

plastic

content never be bio

degrable

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degradable

mean

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means

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it

remain

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remains

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as

such

for many thousands of years and

not

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does not

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decompose creating

hazordou

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hazardous

to the environment

plastic

bags

at it is micro cm in its thickness makes it more

dagerable

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durable

danceable

when

it

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it has

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been eaten by

animal

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an animal

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or by ocean species which ultimately results in

death

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the death

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of that animal.

Secondly

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although

Plastic

bag

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bags

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brought

revolution

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a revolution

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in

market

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the market

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industier

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industries

industry

just to

carry

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carrying

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heavy items in small

bags

but

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apply

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there are several other options

are

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apply

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also

available which can replace synthetic

material

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materials

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such

as

bags

made up of natural

source

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sources

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1995 study was conducted by

british

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journouls

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journals

journal

where

carciogenec

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carcinogenic

material

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material has

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been found in

plastic

content which is destroying nutrition property of any food and if that

plastic

bag burns it produces nescient gas with hampered the natural environment. After

seen

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seeing

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the the more

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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of plastics many countries already has banned

its

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their

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use and they are using natural

biodgerable

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biodegradable

source

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sources

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. So in conclusion I must say just to give a

well

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apply

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healthy and beautiful earth to our coming

offsprings

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offspring

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we should

banned

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ban

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plastic

bag

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bags

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now and its results will

be echoes

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echo

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more than thousands

years

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of years

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from now.