Travelling abroad is regarded as a valuable and good activity for young people, but some think it takes too much time and money. Discuss both view and give opinion.

People vary in their

opinion

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related to flying abroad. Some individuals consider

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as

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an important practice,

whereas

others oppose

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belief and take it as an extravagant and time-consuming activity. In

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essay, I will discuss both opinions, and I support the latter view. A school of thought acknowledges it as an exploration of different cultures.

This

is because youngsters meet native dwellers and get an opportunity to spend some time with them;

this

will help them to learn about their various traditions and

lifestyle

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.

As a result

, it will help them to adapt to the foreign environment easily for future reference

such

as whenever they will plan to continue their study in international universities.

Additionally

, it will enlighten them with widespread career options in the future by

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immense knowledge of different countries.

For instance

, one of my friends easily settled in the USA

last

year because he had visited the same country more than 10 times during his teenage, as he was already aware of the values and

peoples

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of the country. Contrarily,

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taking a vacation

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alien nations,

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needs a plethora amount of money.

As students

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put a financial burden on their parents to organize

this

adventurous trip which includes costly flight tickets, an expensive hotel, lavish outfits, food, and so on.

Consequently

, peers ended up in debt

due to

the squandering of the

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on travelling by their offspring.

On the other hand

,

this

wage can be utilized in plenty of activities - by making different assets for the house,

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investing salary in mutual funds,

saving

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, these

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approaches will help them to open

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new door of

hopes

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.

Besides

property wasting on commuting, a lot of time blows. As long-distance trips

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a minimum number of 15-20 days to explore it completely, thereby, students have to take off days from school, which will affect

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study

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. A study revealed that 20% of students

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India

stuck

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in the UK for two years because of lockdown in the pandemic, who went on a trip.

To conclude

,

although

it will give great experiences and an opportunity to many children;

however

, saving money and time is more important. That’s why I favour the final opinion.