Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Unfortunately,
traffic
has been increasing all over the world. So, it is a crucial issue in every society, which is not solved yet. Experts offer different opinions and one of them is the growth of gas fees. Use synonyms
As a result
, from my point of view, decreasing the Linking Words
traffic
or Use synonyms
pollution
problems will not happen necessarily because it depends on other factors. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
transportation
systems or factories.
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According to
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this
idea, some individuals may say increasing the gas Linking Words
cost
helps reduce Use synonyms
traffic
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pollution
issues. Because, in Use synonyms
this
way, people may use less own cars in travelling or moving in a city and they use public Linking Words
transportation
more. Use synonyms
While
increasing the Linking Words
petrol
fee directly affects the Use synonyms
cost
of many other necessary things. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Linking Words
cost
of public Use synonyms
transportation
(taxis, buses, or subways), or even food materials. Because they are sent all over the cities, so, it is not the best way to use fewer private cars.
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In addition
, factories will have to pay huge Linking Words
money
for primary materials of products by increasing the gas price. So, they may not spend Use synonyms
money
to find the best way to prevent the Use synonyms
pollution
problems which they produce. Another point can be Use synonyms
petrol
smuggling. The more the Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
petrol
increases, the more gasoline smuggling rises. Because many people’s jobs may be related to gasoline. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they cannot spend a large amount of Linking Words
money
to buy expensive Use synonyms
petrol
. So, they resort to smuggling it to get more Use synonyms
money
.
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To conclude
, increasing the price of Linking Words
petrol
increases a lot of other stuff Use synonyms
consequently
. It is not only the best solution for using more public Linking Words
transportation
than private cars, but Use synonyms
also
, it is not the best solution for Linking Words
traffic
or Use synonyms
pollution
problems. Because Use synonyms
petrol
is just one item that affects air Use synonyms
pollution
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