Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Unfortunately,
traffic
has been increasing all over the world. So, it is a crucial issue in every society, which is not solved yet. Experts offer different opinions and one of them is the growth of gas fees. As a result
, from my point of view, decreasing the traffic
or pollution
problems will not happen necessarily because it depends on other factors. For example
, transportation
systems or factories.
According to
this
idea, some individuals may say increasing the gas cost
helps reduce traffic
or pollution
issues. Because, in this
way, people may use less own cars in travelling or moving in a city and they use public transportation
more. While
increasing the petrol
fee directly affects the cost
of many other necessary things. For instance
, the cost
of public transportation
(taxis, buses, or subways), or even food materials. Because they are sent all over the cities, so, it is not the best way to use fewer private cars.
In addition
, factories will have to pay huge money
for primary materials of products by increasing the gas price. So, they may not spend money
to find the best way to prevent the pollution
problems which they produce. Another point can be petrol
smuggling. The more the cost
of petrol
increases, the more gasoline smuggling rises. Because many people’s jobs may be related to gasoline. Therefore
, they cannot spend a large amount of money
to buy expensive petrol
. So, they resort to smuggling it to get more money
.
To conclude
, increasing the price of petrol
increases a lot of other stuff consequently
. It is not only the best solution for using more public transportation
than private cars, but also
, it is not the best solution for traffic
or pollution
problems. Because petrol
is just one item that affects air pollution
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