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Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some public prefers to have a lavish wedding, and they do not mind spending much wage on it. Others opine that
such
 celebrations are a waste of payment. I agree with
this
 view. In my opinion, one can save
this
 fee and utilize it for better purposes. An elaborate/expensive wedding has many benefits.
For example
, it creates memories that the couple can remember for their life. It is
also
 an opportunity for young people to celebrate their happiness with their friends and family.
Consequently
, many public spend too much fund on
this
 occasion to make it memorable and to show off their wealth and status.
Moreover
,
such
 occasions allow family members and friends to get together. On the flip side, a big wedding can
also
 waste a lot more pay. Couples can achieve better things in their life with
this
 pay.
For example
, they can invest it in their children’s education. Some nation take loans to celebrate their marriage lavishly. They have to grapple with the debt for years to come, which will take away all the joy in their lives. Another disadvantage of lavish weddings is that they spur competition. When someone holds an extravagant wedding celebration for themselves or their children, their friends and neighbours will feel compelled to do so.
This
 mentality will eventually lead to many problems in society.
Although
 many people believe that spending many fees on marriages would bring happiness and contentment, I think that
such
 occasions are a waste of salary. Saving
this
 wealth for use in the future is a much better idea.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • kindergarten
  • primary school
  • socialization
  • interaction
  • structured learning
  • communication
  • problem-solving
  • preparation
  • emotional bonding
  • attachment
  • individual attention
  • flexibility
  • real-life experiences
  • opinion
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