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Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain when you want him to do

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Dear sir, I hope you are doing well. I am Lovepreet Kaur, a resident of Brampton. The purpose of writing is to inform you about the worst condition of a road in our
area
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. The road, I am talking about is Hurontario. It is an extremely damaged route in
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area
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. To explicate, there are numerous pits and potholes on its surface. And during the rainstorm, the water got clogged in
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, common people would face a great problem.
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, it is one of the most used pathways, so, there is a very high traffic jam during
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busy hours.
According to
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 me, you should start the construction in
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area
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 as soon as possible.
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, as it is
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 busy road. You can start your work during night time. The
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reason
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 is that during night hours people would be at their homes. So, it would be easier to work
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continuously
 without getting interrupted by the vehicles. Hoping for
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careful consideration. Yours Faithfully, Lovepreet

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Consider adding specific details like the exact location on Hurontario that is most affected by the damage.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check for spelling errors, such as 'reson' instead of 'reason', and 'continuosly' instead of 'continuously'.
coherence and cohesion
Try to break the text into paragraphs more distinctly, as this can enhance readability.
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Your letter is clear and conveys the problem effectively.
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You used a polite and appropriate tone throughout your letter.
coherence and cohesion
The structure includes a clear introduction, body, and closing, which aids in coherence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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