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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Reading plays a vital role in an individual's life. Nowadays, the trend of reading
books
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 online increasing day by day as compared to traditional
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. Reading
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 online definitely has lots of outweighing the disadvantages but it has
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 some drawbacks.
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 with, E-
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 take a special place in everybody's life. E-
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 are more popular these days due to the availability of the internet. A person can access his favourite novel online at any corner of the country.
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, there is no need for physical storage to keep these
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 at home or office.
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, It does not take any cost of printing and no need to keep the paper.
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,
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 week, I went to New Delhi and I want to read my favourite book at that time I read
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 book online with an easy approach.
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, It has
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 some drawbacks too.
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, reading online means continue watching at the screen can weaken the eyes. To illustrate, In Norway, a doctor suggested not to watch any screen continue more than 10 minutes it will harm the eyes.
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, data stored online is not safe. It can corrupt anytime. Sometimes it can be stolen. There is
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 a need for a continuous power supply internet connection. At some places, there is a network issue which halts the system and a person cannot read anymore. To conclude, In my opinion, reading online has numerous benefits which outweigh its disadvantages. E-booklet have an easy approach, save cost and space to keep booklet. Whereas it has drawbacks which can overcome.
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